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redbrunja ([personal profile] redbrunja) wrote2008-03-08 10:50 pm
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Fic: "I’ll Take You Where The Water’s Deep"

Title: I’ll Take You Where The Water’s Deep
Author: [personal profile] redbrunja
Fandom: Avatar: The Last Airbender
Rating: R for sexual themes.
Author’s Note: Sequel to “Or Else This Heat Might Turn To Frost”
Prompted by [profile] rashaka’s reminding me of how awesome and apropos this song is.  Written for [profile] zutara100, prompt 002. Ends
Summery: “When she was a child, she used to play with the lamp flames.” Katara tries to do the right thing.

“This was a mistake, and it’s over.”

And it was, and it is, and Katara knows she made the right decision.

When she was a child, she used to play with the lamp flames, before she realized that it caused the oil to vanish faster, and they didn’t have oil enough to spare, not just so she could get her fingers sooty while she waited on the endless Southern Winters. But she remembered how to do it; the trick was quickness. Katara would drag her fingers through the flame, fast, and there would be only a flicker of warmth over her unburned fingers.

Zuko was the same; the longer she circled around him, let herself be tempted and worse, let herself succumb, the more likely it would be that instead of walking away with sooty lips and hair snarled into knots from his hands, it would end badly, Sokka furious, her father disappointed, Aang betrayed.

She was a Master Bender of the Southern Water Tribe, and there was a difference between making a former enemy a begrudging ally (“Well, fine, if you really want to, you can heat up the dish water and I suppose it couldn’t hurt if you heated up the bathwater too–”) and willingly taking him (his lips on her neck, his exhale hot enough to raise blisters, hands gripping her hips hard enough to bruise) to her bed.

No, it was better to end it now, while no one knew, while there would be no awkward looks, no questions, no recriminations.

She lasted a week and a half.

Then Katara was slipping into his room as the sun first creep over the horizon, falling into his arms while light the color of honey filled his chamber.

He kissed her like she’d been years away, gone to fight in some horrific war, instead of having seen her ten hours ago at dinner.

This was a betrayal, she knew it was, but when Zuko was moving over her, as slow and steadfast as the sea on a summer day, she couldn’t care.

She choked on her sobs when she came and Zuko kissed the tears away from her cheeks and murmured promises she knew he’d die to keep.

Somehow, that just made it worse.

Re: "Women Have Needs, You Know."

[identity profile] redbrunja.livejournal.com 2008-03-11 06:20 am (UTC)(link)
Doesn't it? The challenge will be getting Hakota and Sokka's reactions right - I want to work it so that Katara ends up standing her ground and not letting them pack her off to the South Pole, and words get said that can't be taken back.

[identity profile] redbrunja.livejournal.com 2008-03-11 06:31 am (UTC)(link)
I look at it as a pattern of behavior - Gran-Gran not only said, I'm not going to marry Pakku, she did something incredibly brave and independent, plus she actively approved and aided her grandchildren in going off the save the Avatar at 16 and 14. To me, that's a pattern were I would expect at least a decent 'these are the facts of life' approach to follow, but you're right, it doesn't have to.

. I think in making interpretations we have to look to canon for evidence. And any interpretations that do not have canon backing are sort of invalid.

This is true, but since we're looking at characters and forming opinions based on subtext (if Katara reacts like this to that, then it makes sense to me that... etc) I think arguing which bit of fanon has more canon backing gets dicy.

I think both Zuko and Katara would not admit to knowing anything.

Well, what they'd admit to knowing and in what circumstances is a whole nother kettle of fish, imho. ^_^ Plus, can you ever see Katara admitting she DOESN'T know something, if she didn't have to?

Re: Lovely.

[identity profile] manonlechat.livejournal.com 2008-03-11 11:37 pm (UTC)(link)
You make good points.

Also, there's the reason for abstaining from sex that most pre-Birth Control societies understood: you risked pregnancy when you had sex. And I REALLY don't think that either Zuko or Mai would want that right now.

And as comfortable Zuko has become with his sexuality, I can still imagine him sweating bucket loads of water over the thought of having sex with a girl. XD

I dunno, he's become a lot more comfortable with sexuality in general. And remember that he still comes from the same family stock as Iroh! ;)

[identity profile] cheezmonke.livejournal.com 2008-03-12 02:01 pm (UTC)(link)
The last two lines were spectacular. ♥

[identity profile] redbrunja.livejournal.com 2008-03-12 10:49 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! I quite like them myself.

(And that is an awesome icon, by the way.)

[identity profile] cheezmonke.livejournal.com 2008-03-13 07:04 pm (UTC)(link)
[livejournal.com profile] hermonthis is the genius behind it ^.^

Nice quote

(Anonymous) 2008-05-12 06:12 pm (UTC)(link)

Take time to reflect on all the things you have, not as a result of your
merit or hard work or because God or chance or the efforts of other people
have given them to you.


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[identity profile] anat-astarte.livejournal.com 2008-07-17 05:09 am (UTC)(link)
Oohh..love all the images and emotions in this. Great fic! <3

[identity profile] redbrunja.livejournal.com 2008-07-17 07:02 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you. And since I replied to your other comment first, this is the sequel to 'Turn To Frost', just fyi.

Hello

(Anonymous) 2008-08-22 07:56 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm new here, just wanted to say hello and introduce myself.

Re: Hello

[identity profile] redbrunja.livejournal.com 2008-08-23 02:01 am (UTC)(link)
Hi! Do you have an lj?

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