Somehow, my favorite line in this is the parenthesized phrase with the three 'from's. I love seeing grammar played with in ways that feel organic and poignant, and break with cliche in the process. Also, your doesn't even notice conveys the sense of incredulous outrage very well. Nice piece. :)
(I think you've got a typo, though. "most of hiS doesn't"?)
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(I think you've got a typo, though. "most of hiS doesn't"?)