i'm really glad someone picked this fic for your commentary. When I read this the first time, I just kept on thinking of Kakashi's side of the story and reading it again with your commentary, I shouldn't have been very surprised you had his perspective in mind as well. But I'm glad you included that, because it just makes the story all the more heartbreaking. This is definitely one of my favorites too. I'm also impressed by all the symbolism you managed to squeeze in there, I wouldn't have caught it on my own, but now it makes it all the more better!