Thank you! Sai's dialouge is both fun, and a bitch to write.
And now between this and "As For You" I'm seeing "women punching guys, who have crushes on them, hard enough to furrow the dirt" as a reoccuring theme in your fics.
I was thinking about that as I wrote it, and kinda flinching at the fact that I'm repeating myself.
In the first draft he gets punched over the counter, which just... didn't really work logistically, and I liked the image of Sakura standing in the light of the restuant. Besides, I can argue that consider how much Kishimoto hammers in the Sakura is Tsunade comparisons, I can repeat themes.
Frankly, I'm surprised you read this - I know you're not a naruto fan.
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And now between this and "As For You" I'm seeing "women punching guys, who have crushes on them, hard enough to furrow the dirt" as a reoccuring theme in your fics.
I was thinking about that as I wrote it, and kinda flinching at the fact that I'm repeating myself.
In the first draft he gets punched over the counter, which just... didn't really work logistically, and I liked the image of Sakura standing in the light of the restuant. Besides, I can argue that consider how much Kishimoto hammers in the Sakura is Tsunade comparisons, I can repeat themes.
Frankly, I'm surprised you read this - I know you're not a naruto fan.