Oh God, this should be angsty and depressing and full of conflict, triangles, angst blah blah blah. But it's SAI and SakuraandSai and there's NO WAY that doesn't have crack in it to beat the angst away. xD
This was so enjoyable, even though I've never thought Sasuke was sexually attracted to Sakura. This situation was just too hilarious, and you NAILED Sai and Sakura. Sai being irresistible despite or because of his obvious retardedness (which is...endearing. LOOK OUT SAKURA IT'S A TRAP), and Sakura having her temper and just...growing up. It wasn't just that she wasn't attracted to Sasuke anymore. You showed her growing up in other ways: her dedication to her work, her skills in higher class missions; this was a detail I liked very much because some forget how smart and competent others subtly remark about her.
What made this so much better (if possible) is that I could TELL how much fun you had writing this. Gah; I haven't read a Sai/Sakura or a Naruto-fic period in a while, and I don't know why I had an impulse to click on the link but I did AND I AM SO MEMORYING IT. &hearts
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This was so enjoyable, even though I've never thought Sasuke was sexually attracted to Sakura. This situation was just too hilarious, and you NAILED Sai and Sakura. Sai being irresistible despite or because of his obvious retardedness (which is...endearing. LOOK OUT SAKURA IT'S A TRAP), and Sakura having her temper and just...growing up. It wasn't just that she wasn't attracted to Sasuke anymore. You showed her growing up in other ways: her dedication to her work, her skills in higher class missions; this was a detail I liked very much because some forget how smart and competent others subtly remark about her.
What made this so much better (if possible) is that I could TELL how much fun you had writing this. Gah; I haven't read a Sai/Sakura or a Naruto-fic period in a while, and I don't know why I had an impulse to click on the link but I did AND I AM SO MEMORYING IT. &hearts