http://indira14.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] indira14.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] redbrunja 2009-07-24 08:53 pm (UTC)

*giggly giggles* Seriously, I'm STILL giggling like crazy even aftr I've read it over TWICE! digthenym linked me t this fic, adn when she said that it was going to be SaiSaku and one-sided SasuSaku, well, I was frakly expecting a bit more... angst, and love triangles and all that jazz, you know? BUT *giggles madly* this was so cracktastic!! I loved that even though you wrote this from SASUKE'S point of view, it has so much hilarity packed into every word - writing from Mr. Emo Prince's POV is depressing most of the time, you know? I jusdt don't know HOW you made this work! The thing that hit me most was the characterization - every one of them PERFECT, especially Sai. I LOVED the last sentence - really meaningful! Andway, this was a riot and a half, and I hope to see more from you soon!!

P.S. Could you give me some tips on Sai's characterization? Your diaogue is really amazing.

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