February 2023

S M T W T F S
   12 34
567891011
12131415161718
19202122232425
262728    

Style Credit

Expand Cut Tags

No cut tags
Friday, July 24th, 2009 08:53 pm (UTC)
*giggly giggles* Seriously, I'm STILL giggling like crazy even aftr I've read it over TWICE! digthenym linked me t this fic, adn when she said that it was going to be SaiSaku and one-sided SasuSaku, well, I was frakly expecting a bit more... angst, and love triangles and all that jazz, you know? BUT *giggles madly* this was so cracktastic!! I loved that even though you wrote this from SASUKE'S point of view, it has so much hilarity packed into every word - writing from Mr. Emo Prince's POV is depressing most of the time, you know? I jusdt don't know HOW you made this work! The thing that hit me most was the characterization - every one of them PERFECT, especially Sai. I LOVED the last sentence - really meaningful! Andway, this was a riot and a half, and I hope to see more from you soon!!

P.S. Could you give me some tips on Sai's characterization? Your diaogue is really amazing.

Reply

This account has disabled anonymous posting.
If you don't have an account you can create one now.
HTML doesn't work in the subject.
More info about formatting