And Sasuke is so self-absorbed and self-involved that I imagine even in his most depressing there is a thread of melodrama. And I did add hints that Sasuke was unhappy, especially with the last line.
As for Sai's characterization... I sweated blood over each and ever line of his. Sai is VERY hard to write. What I did was reread the sections of the manga he's in to try and get the tone right.
Do you have specific questions? Or what situation Sai is going to be in? Because answering those might be easier than me just trying to give you general tips.
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And Sasuke is so self-absorbed and self-involved that I imagine even in his most depressing there is a thread of melodrama. And I did add hints that Sasuke was unhappy, especially with the last line.
As for Sai's characterization... I sweated blood over each and ever line of his. Sai is VERY hard to write. What I did was reread the sections of the manga he's in to try and get the tone right.
Do you have specific questions? Or what situation Sai is going to be in? Because answering those might be easier than me just trying to give you general tips.