And I am SO tempted to write a commentary for this, because
1.) I want to be able to go, 'look, here, see - I changed that word five times. And do you know how many ways you can describe a bowl? I found all of them.'
and
2.) writing this, I was so concious of 'well, this would be what Sai would be aware of, this is what I can slip in via body reactions, and ALL OF THIS IS STUFF THAT'S HE'S TOTALLY UNAWARE OF.
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And I am SO tempted to write a commentary for this, because
1.) I want to be able to go, 'look, here, see - I changed that word five times. And do you know how many ways you can describe a bowl? I found all of them.'
and
2.) writing this, I was so concious of 'well, this would be what Sai would be aware of, this is what I can slip in via body reactions, and ALL OF THIS IS STUFF THAT'S HE'S TOTALLY UNAWARE OF.