ext_9157 ([identity profile] redbrunja.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] redbrunja 2007-02-12 09:20 am (UTC)

That seems to be the consensus.

I'm now wondering 1.) why the author ever thought that line would be a good idea, 2.) what beta reader didn't catch that that line was squicky and 3.) if there wasn't a beta reader, did the author not reread what she wrote before posting?

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