Yeah, flowerly language is one of the hardest things to do well, imho.
"Maka's velvet warmth", I think? Almost as good as lady-softness. Seriously, anonymous author, you wrote such an otherwise excellent piece! What possessed you? >.>
See, I don't think that would have phased me. Anything with womb however? I mock the anatomy fail.
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"Maka's velvet warmth", I think? Almost as good as lady-softness. Seriously, anonymous author, you wrote such an otherwise excellent piece! What possessed you? >.>
See, I don't think that would have phased me. Anything with womb however? I mock the anatomy fail.