I think this is an interesting conversation. The way I'm reading the fic is this: the world these girls exist in is a hetero-dominated one, Sakura is straight or at least not attracted to Ino, and Ino is operating within the rules of the world she exists in (primarily heterosexual, woman she wants is straight). I think it's a good treatment of that. It's nothing revolutionary, but then it is just good ol' porn.

I'm with you in that the biggest issue I'm seeing in the fic is the lack of consent on Sakura's part (and well, Kiba's too. His body is being taken over for purposes of lesbian sex, even if his mind isn't along for the ride.) But then, consent is sort of the big issue with Ino's jutsu. Which would be a cool angle to explore with her, I think - does the fact that her fighting technique is based on taking away the most basic control/consent desensitize Ino to issues of consent??

But I'm the first to admit that what's sexy isn't always feminist or politically correct. And this is definitely some sexy writing.