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Monday, June 1st, 2009 11:23 pm (UTC)
Simply amazing. Your writing is really powerful - I could pick it apart and each line would stand out on its own. Not quite sure why, but I especially loved this part: He'd watch her grit her teeth, clench her fists until the leather of her gloves moaned, stare at the ground like Icha Icha was written in the dirt, and yet she continued to act like she was continually auditioning for the role of Uchiha Sakura.

A small typo - 'she's snap'.

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