http://mochalatt3.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] mochalatt3.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] redbrunja 2009-06-02 09:52 am (UTC)

I feel like I'm missing something cuz while I really liked the fic (and the steamy KakaSaku) unlike most of the people who commented before me I can't feel any sympathy for Sakura. She needs to grow a pair, be who she really is, and stop being a cheating ho. There is no justification for that kind of behavior and all Sasuke really needs is one more person betraying him. I mean why is she reverting back to this spineless Stepford? I actually think she's being quite horrible. Don't misunderstand I'm just criticizing her, not the fic itself. I really liked how gritty the whole thing came across. Very fitting for a situation like that, and I also liked how it was from Kakashi's point of view, like he could see so easily who she really was (while Sasuke is obviously in the dark). Good job.

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