I posted it a couple other places, so I did wake up to a couple of comments, which was nice.
My willpower almost failed me three or four times though... I'd start reading the first paragraph then say, "NO! I have to get to work!!"
Ha! I can totally see you doing that and it makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside.
Yeah, the pronouns were needed, and I think they don't stand out to much - not the way a repeated name would. Writing it, however, I was like, I've typed 'she' a thousand times in the last two minutes.'
Yeah, usually I like what I'm writing when I'm writing it and after I post in, but that almost finished, pre-submit time I kinda freak out a little bit.
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My willpower almost failed me three or four times though... I'd start reading the first paragraph then say, "NO! I have to get to work!!"
Ha! I can totally see you doing that and it makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside.
Yeah, the pronouns were needed, and I think they don't stand out to much - not the way a repeated name would. Writing it, however, I was like, I've typed 'she' a thousand times in the last two minutes.'
Yeah, usually I like what I'm writing when I'm writing it and after I post in, but that almost finished, pre-submit time I kinda freak out a little bit.