ext_9157 ([identity profile] redbrunja.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] redbrunja 2010-01-13 11:01 pm (UTC)

You totally get an internet cookie.

First line: Tsubaki was three days past her sixteenth birthday when Black*Star died.

Last line: Mifune turned away from the sunset filling the windows, his eyes seeking out Tsubaki's form, her body shadowed and hair falling free.

The biggest problem I had writing this was figuring out which characters were relevant to Tsubaki's and Mifune's arc, especially once Black*Star was out of the picture.

This almost didn't get posted because I really wallow (almost fetishize) Tsubaki's youth in relation to Mifune. I hesitated before I posted.

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