Hee, yes, I grabbed the laptop right when I got up this morning, which is unusual....something just told me to do it. And lo and behold... :D So I rushed through getting ready, sat down with my bowl of cereal and read away. XD
So, as promised...
For example, the fifth time they had sex (and the second time they did so in a bed)
I don't know why, but that made me squeal. XD Maybe because I have this thing for sex in places other than beds...I don't know. But it made me squeal all the same.
I love the fact that he realized what caused Yaone to flinch right before a battle... XD Those poor, unsuspecting bastards. :D
And let me just say - siting all the various places they have had sex - total win.
Typo?: she caught her chin in his hand and stopped him. Flipped pronouns or am I totally not reading that sentence correctly? And “You didn’t seen to enjoy it.” I believe you meant 'seem' :D
I love that Yaone is so adamant about equal pleasure (even if it is due to past affairs... It creates a really nice tension between them.
The first paragraph you sent me (I believe you said in another comment it was the first you wrote at all) still cracks me up. :D
responsible for Yaone responding to his profession of love with, “Hakkai, please don’t feel the need to lie to me,”
All I could think was, "Awww...poor Hakkai!" XD
““D is equal to castration plus heated poker inserted forcibly into the gullet?’” An incredulous voice said behind him. “Dude, what the hell kind of algebra is this?”
I giggled. Loudly. At 6:10 in the morning. Good thing Jim was in the back of the house. XD
Really, the whole conversation between Hakkai and Gojyo was brilliant. "this goes on for five cigarettes?"... I totally had a roommate like that, and it was truly a measurement of time. :D
Willingly sleeping in the back of a Jeep while it lightly rained when there was a warm soft bed right there clearly won him the Best Best Friend Ever Award, Gojyo was sure, and decided that if he got sick from staying out all night in the rain, he was damn well going to cough on Hakkai until Hakkai caught his cold).
LMAO - yes, that would indeed win him the Best Best Friend Ever Award. XD
And the last line made my fangirl melt. :D
It really wasn't dull at all, because it's very Hakkai. Had it been written with anyone else as the main focus, it certainly wouldn't have worked. But given that Hakkai was a teacher, and he does tend to think things through rather analytically, it works perfectly. :D
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So, as promised...
For example, the fifth time they had sex (and the second time they did so in a bed)
I don't know why, but that made me squeal. XD Maybe because I have this thing for sex in places other than beds...I don't know. But it made me squeal all the same.
I love the fact that he realized what caused Yaone to flinch right before a battle... XD Those poor, unsuspecting bastards. :D
And let me just say - siting all the various places they have had sex - total win.
Typo?: she caught her chin in his hand and stopped him. Flipped pronouns or am I totally not reading that sentence correctly? And “You didn’t seen to enjoy it.” I believe you meant 'seem' :D
I love that Yaone is so adamant about equal pleasure (even if it is due to past affairs... It creates a really nice tension between them.
The first paragraph you sent me (I believe you said in another comment it was the first you wrote at all) still cracks me up. :D
responsible for Yaone responding to his profession of love with, “Hakkai, please don’t feel the need to lie to me,”
All I could think was, "Awww...poor Hakkai!" XD
““D is equal to castration plus heated poker inserted forcibly into the gullet?’” An incredulous voice said behind him. “Dude, what the hell kind of algebra is this?”
I giggled. Loudly. At 6:10 in the morning. Good thing Jim was in the back of the house. XD
Really, the whole conversation between Hakkai and Gojyo was brilliant. "this goes on for five cigarettes?"... I totally had a roommate like that, and it was truly a measurement of time. :D
Willingly sleeping in the back of a Jeep while it lightly rained when there was a warm soft bed right there clearly won him the Best Best Friend Ever Award, Gojyo was sure, and decided that if he got sick from staying out all night in the rain, he was damn well going to cough on Hakkai until Hakkai caught his cold).
LMAO - yes, that would indeed win him the Best Best Friend Ever Award. XD
And the last line made my fangirl melt. :D
It really wasn't dull at all, because it's very Hakkai. Had it been written with anyone else as the main focus, it certainly wouldn't have worked. But given that Hakkai was a teacher, and he does tend to think things through rather analytically, it works perfectly. :D
Into memories it goes. :D