That was the lingering pyschic feeling from im last light (or the night before. You said you were going to bed, and logged off in the middle of me typing 'be sure to check your flist tomorrow!'
For example, the fifth time they had sex (and the second time they did so in a bed)
I don't know why, but that made me squeal
I liked that line as well, just for what it implied about the sex that I didn't talk about - and you know it would probably be way easier for them to get in the mood/ lose there inhibitions enough to start a relationship when there wasn't a huge chance that people who they didn't want finding out where two inches away on the otherside of the wall.
I love the fact that he realized what caused Yaone to flinch right before a battle... XD Those poor, unsuspecting bastards. :D
Yeah. I have them mental image of Goku and Gojyo just standing there with big eyes, and Goku starting to saw something and Gojyo shaking his head, and later, no one asking how Hakkai's feeling.
The typos are fixed.
I love that Yaone is so adamant about equal pleasure (even if it is due to past affairs... It creates a really nice tension between them.
Ask me about where I came up with this on im some time. *giggle*
All I could think was, "Awww...poor Hakkai!" XD
Poor Hakkai? Poor Yaone! Think about what that says about her! But yeah, that probably wasn't one of the high points of Hakkai's relationship with Yaone.
I giggled. Loudly. At 6:10 in the morning. Good thing Jim was in the back of the house. XD
Really, the whole conversation between Hakkai and Gojyo was brilliant. "this goes on for five cigarettes?"... I totally had a roommate like that, and it was truly a measurement of time. :D
I'm really pleased with both those instances of Gojyo-isms. As soon as I wrote the line about Hakkai thinking of revenge mathmatically, I had to write in Gojyo's response.
LMAO - yes, that would indeed win him the Best Best Friend Ever Award. XD
It really would. And he'd totally do it too.
And the last line made my fangirl melt. :D
I'm really glad that last line worked, because I stared at it for a long, long time. When i first got to the point where it was time to end it, I was just like, '...okay, now how the hell do I wrap this up?' so I'm glad that it was a metly ending.
Into memories? *is very, very flattered*
And thanks for the wonderful feedback - I'm saving the e-mail with it, just in case lj crashes or something world shattering like that. ^_^
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That was the lingering pyschic feeling from im last light (or the night before. You said you were going to bed, and logged off in the middle of me typing 'be sure to check your flist tomorrow!'
For example, the fifth time they had sex (and the second time they did so in a bed)
I don't know why, but that made me squeal
I liked that line as well, just for what it implied about the sex that I didn't talk about - and you know it would probably be way easier for them to get in the mood/ lose there inhibitions enough to start a relationship when there wasn't a huge chance that people who they didn't want finding out where two inches away on the otherside of the wall.
I love the fact that he realized what caused Yaone to flinch right before a battle... XD Those poor, unsuspecting bastards. :D
Yeah. I have them mental image of Goku and Gojyo just standing there with big eyes, and Goku starting to saw something and Gojyo shaking his head, and later, no one asking how Hakkai's feeling.
The typos are fixed.
I love that Yaone is so adamant about equal pleasure (even if it is due to past affairs... It creates a really nice tension between them.
Ask me about where I came up with this on im some time. *giggle*
All I could think was, "Awww...poor Hakkai!" XD
Poor Hakkai? Poor Yaone! Think about what that says about her! But yeah, that probably wasn't one of the high points of Hakkai's relationship with Yaone.
I giggled. Loudly. At 6:10 in the morning. Good thing Jim was in the back of the house. XD
Really, the whole conversation between Hakkai and Gojyo was brilliant. "this goes on for five cigarettes?"... I totally had a roommate like that, and it was truly a measurement of time. :D
I'm really pleased with both those instances of Gojyo-isms. As soon as I wrote the line about Hakkai thinking of revenge mathmatically, I had to write in Gojyo's response.
LMAO - yes, that would indeed win him the Best Best Friend Ever Award. XD
It really would. And he'd totally do it too.
And the last line made my fangirl melt. :D
I'm really glad that last line worked, because I stared at it for a long, long time. When i first got to the point where it was time to end it, I was just like, '...okay, now how the hell do I wrap this up?' so I'm glad that it was a metly ending.
Into memories? *is very, very flattered*
And thanks for the wonderful feedback - I'm saving the e-mail with it, just in case lj crashes or something world shattering like that. ^_^