ext_9157 ([identity profile] redbrunja.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] redbrunja 2010-08-12 05:15 am (UTC)

Re: time to kill

Oh, this is exactly what I wanted! Something very them, showing the rough edges and the way they're similar. Fantastic job.

Some favorite lines:

She thinks this the ultimate sign of weakness; they've all been through the exact same thing. Anyone who can't mask their remorse didn't deserve to win at all.

She bites, but her voice isn't quite as reprimanding as she wanted it to be, and, okay, she might be smiling a little. Somewhere there is a line between horrible and hilarious and she lost sight of it a long time ago.

Neither of them have ever taken a tribute home with them, and it's beginning to wear them out.

Awww.

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