Someone was.... I finished Grave Peril last night. And part of me wants to go back to the first book and check something... I swear, the name of a character actually changed in the middle of the third book. (She was in the first book, then mentioned again early in the third...when she came back in toward the end, I swear that wasn't her name.)

Apart from the standard typos and sentences that don't read correctly or are really bad fragments, etc, etc. I mean, as writers, we all do it. But that's what professional editors are for. And hell, what are they paying this guy for??