ext_99013 ([identity profile] pzb.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] redbrunja 2007-10-24 08:15 pm (UTC)

Re: Farmboy, brush my horse. Farmboy, polish my saddle.

Actually, I did have an idea reappear this morning. It was actually the original beginning to EL like...8 months ago. XD But it didn't fit at the time. It actually will fit better now...

But it's that lovely cliche of Hakkai dreaming of trying to save Kanan, but instead of Kanan, he realizes after the fact that it's Yaone, so he goes on the "I don't want her to be hurt because of me" trip. Add a little angst and make the next sex scene a little more worth it, I think.

There's nothing necessarily wrong with rampant porn...I would just like there to be a little something more to it than just one big, long fuckfest. XD

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