ext_9157 ([identity profile] redbrunja.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] redbrunja 2007-10-26 05:47 pm (UTC)

Re: Farmboy, brush my horse. Farmboy, polish my saddle.

Okay, pzb, I don't often say this but - don't write that. I have read is so many times and it always sucks. I had the 'oh, I realized I loved her in a dream.' I could see dreaming about her in the same situation as Kanan and failing to save her, or something like that, but I hate hate hate the she's Kanan - no, she's Yaone and the two characters are so interchangable that my subconcious can't tell them apart dream. I mean really, how often in a dream do you NOT KNOW who you're dreaming about? I mean, I can see some crazy dream logic where Yaone is Kanan or something, but I have the post-sleep exposition of emotion thing.

....sorry to be a downer.

However, I am all for adding a little angst to make the smut sweeter.

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