"She could no more stay away than she could create a child within her body." I had to think about that line a bit- I was going, what can't Lust do? To say ‘live’ would be a little obvious and kind of untrue since that's what she's searching so hard for, a way to live, but the idea of barrenness (imho) works for Lust on a number of levels.
"Scar nibbles at her lips delicately and she has the faint and surreal wish to watch him eat fruit.
I like that line, too, and I'm glad it didn't seem disruptive, because while it is adding new image and tone into the piece, it also adds the seed of the idea that they could actually have relationship where they're Lust and Scar as opposed to Ghost Of My Dead Brother's Wife Who I Was In Love With and Guy Who Can Tell Me About My Past.
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"She could no more stay away than she could create a child within her body." I had to think about that line a bit- I was going, what can't Lust do? To say ‘live’ would be a little obvious and kind of untrue since that's what she's searching so hard for, a way to live, but the idea of barrenness (imho) works for Lust on a number of levels.
"Scar nibbles at her lips delicately and she has the faint and surreal wish to watch him eat fruit.
I like that line, too, and I'm glad it didn't seem disruptive, because while it is adding new image and tone into the piece, it also adds the seed of the idea that they could actually have relationship where they're Lust and Scar as opposed to Ghost Of My Dead Brother's Wife Who I Was In Love With and Guy Who Can Tell Me About My Past.
Glad you liked!