Speed-Beta Time

[redbrunja]

Okay, I'm writing my Sai-fic, and I want him to say something really insulting to Ino without realizing it.

Here's what I have so far:

Once, Sai had asked Ino why she persisted in pointlessly flaunting her sexual availability in front of a teammate who was clearly uninterested in her specifically and possibly the entire female gender. Ino had slapped him across the face and then attacked him with a kunai when he commented that she hit more more gently than Sakura did.

I honestly don't think that sounds quite bad enough. Basically, I want Sai to say something to the effect off: why do you act like an utter whore around Shikamaru when he's clearly either homosexual or revolted by your appearance?

Only it needs to be phrase more Sai-like.
 

Comments

[nimblnymph.livejournal.com]

Ahhhh... That's right! His book, I remember now!

Yes, that would be perfect then. He sees it as a way of showing brotherly type affection, but because ROOT sucked all the social tact out of him he's not portraying it properly. Aw, that's sort of sad and cute at the same time.

[redbrunja.livejournal.com]

So much of Sai is sad and cute. (and often annoying) all at once.