Okay, so I'm doing
avatar_contest because I want to get back into the habit of writing for Avatar and honestly, I'm sorry I broke up with that show the way I did.
The last couple of prompts have both reminded me of Azula and you know, the more time goes by the more I realize I am really, really disappointed in how her arc turned out. Even thought I know that she was going crazy because of Mai and Ty Lee betraying her, it still read a lot like another women losing her sanity when when she got power.
I think that Zuko leaving Mai (what was presumably) a really thoughtful letter is a good way to break up with someone in general. Additionally, I think telling her face to face would have been dumb and given Azula a chance to stop him.
It is okay that Ozai was really a faceless villain. That was his role and we didn't need to know/care about his motivations the way we did Azula, Mai, and Ty Lee.
Also, you know Zuko's scar? That is not a symbol of Zuko and Katara's love and when Zuko looks at it he's not going to think about saving Katara; he's going to think about how two of the four members of his family have tried to kill him.
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The last couple of prompts have both reminded me of Azula and you know, the more time goes by the more I realize I am really, really disappointed in how her arc turned out. Even thought I know that she was going crazy because of Mai and Ty Lee betraying her, it still read a lot like another women losing her sanity when when she got power.
I think that Zuko leaving Mai (what was presumably) a really thoughtful letter is a good way to break up with someone in general. Additionally, I think telling her face to face would have been dumb and given Azula a chance to stop him.
It is okay that Ozai was really a faceless villain. That was his role and we didn't need to know/care about his motivations the way we did Azula, Mai, and Ty Lee.
Also, you know Zuko's scar? That is not a symbol of Zuko and Katara's love and when Zuko looks at it he's not going to think about saving Katara; he's going to think about how two of the four members of his family have tried to kill him.
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I read Azula's downfall as family issues. The catalyst might be Mai and Ty Lee betraying her, but the root is Ozai and Ursa (faceless as they may be)- you can see her reaction when her dad basically dismissed her in the finale.
The popular opinion is there because it gives more reason for Dangerous Ladies femmeslash (mostly for Azula/Ty Lee, if I'm not mistaken).
Also, you know Zuko's scar? That is not a symbol of Zuko and Katara's love and when Zuko looks at it he's not going to think about saving Katara; he's going to think about how two of the four members of his family have tried to kill him.
Ah, yes. Agreed.
Ozai as the faceless villain is one reason I don't find his last stand against Aang as epic as I find Zuko's and Azula's.
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Ozai as the faceless villain is one reason I don't find his last stand against Aang as epic as I find Zuko's and Azula's.
For me, it was more how Aang's arc was played out that made me find that fight not-epic.
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But still, I read it as the betrayal unhinged her so badly, and she had absolutely no time to recover from it.
On a side note, I think I fell in love with Azula as a character in "The Beach," when for a brief moment you see her facade fall when she says her mother thought she was a monster. It was in that moment that really added a lot of depth to Azula, I think.
It's interesting to think about!
Lastly, I'm very glad that Zuko's scar wasn't healed, and yeah, it would be a terrible reminder about how incredibly messed up his family is.
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1. Honestly, I see Azula's breakdown as the logical end of her character arc, and her paranoia as a result of it, not a cause. It was pretty clearly going on since "Boiling Rock," and she's never been particularly stable. Also, a lot of it had to do with love. She felt as if everyone close to her was abandoning her, which triggered her breakdown, which triggered the hallucinations of the first person who abandoned her: Ursa.
2. Agreed. It was the only thing he could do. Mai's loyalties were never really particularly clear up until "Boiling Rock," and he needed to risk nothing. She needed to have no idea where he was, and she needed to not know he was gone until he was far away.
3. Yeah, but once we saw Ozai's face and he became more of a character, we needed more. If they had just kept him this faceless figurehead villain, that'd have worked wonderfully.
4. Yes.
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2.) And even in Boiling Rock, I would argue, her loyalties were clear in the other direction. Not letting Zuko die, is, to my mind, far, far different that say, letting him go to fight the fire nation is, and I don't think she wouldn't have done that if it wasn't Zuko's life on the line.
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Yes, I'm sure dragging him off for Azula to lock in prison would have given her much closure. And yes, while just getting dumped and not being able to talk back his bad, I see so many people talking about what an omg awful way for Zuko to break up with her and I'm like, really? really now? And knowing Zuko I bet he'd do a BETTER break up in writing than in person, honestly.
Yeah, that scar will bring him some bad memories. But I don't think it's entirely impossible for Zuko to see that scar in a good light.
Knowing Zuko, I find this far-fetched. Especially cause it's a pretty damn ugly scar and he already HAD one of those. That said, I wish fanficcers would actually do the work instead of gabbing on chatrooms about how that scar is totally proof of zutara love111!!!111
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She WAS really mad at his for what he did and she got to tell him off! And I'm not saying she doesn't have a right to be angry, because that's a natural emotion with a break up, but I don't think that it was this omg awful text message break up thing that everyone is acting like it is.
Especially after she had to have her UNCLE release her from prison, after what Mai did for Zuko.
EXACTLY! That is one of the few times that Zuko is honestly not treating Mai well, but of course NO ONE pays any attention to that!
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Yes. Admittedly, I got out of fandom after the finale, so I MIGHT not have heard it if people were talking, but I DO know that everyone HARPED on the good bye letter but very few people mentioned FORGETTING HER WHILE SHE WAS IN PRISON (and it was always zutara fans, which was, of course, grounds for immediate dismissal of the idea.)
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Of course, he didn't care about the power, he cared about being accepted and loved by his family. Like Azula cared about pleasing her parents.
a good way to break up with someone in general. In his situation, it was the safest. In general it's callous and cowardly. A letter can be a good way to clearly get things stated clearly, but if you can't even read it aloud to them, the least you can do is hand it over in person and wait there or nearby while they read it.
It was right for the situation, but in general? Bollocks.
This (http://phuzzypanda.deviantart.com/art/Avatar-Final-Thoughts-1-92264562) comic pretty much sums up my most common through about the scar.
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This is true. However, the implication is that in the finale he's going to be a great Fire Lord, and I think Azula SHOULD have made an awesome evil Fire Lord.
http://coffeeandink.livejournal.com/879446.html
In general it's callous and cowardly. A letter can be a good way to clearly get things stated clearly, but if you can't even read it aloud to them, the least you can do is hand it over in person and wait there or nearby while they read it.
I honestly disagree, ESPECIALLY if the other person has a way to contact you afterwards (which, admittedly, Mai didn't). I think it can be easier to say what you need to clearly in a letter, and by not being there you can give the person time to process without forcing them to immediately react.
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(I was yelling at the screen for her to Agni Kai Zuko AFTER getting coronated, I admit)
I would agree with that meta-essay more if it weren't for the fact that abandonment, paranoia, and arrogance destroyed Azula, not power. As
No one has broken up with me in a letter or e-mail, so I guess I can't argue from personal experience. I think it wouldn't give proper closure.
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Also, I did feel that Azula's insanity took away from the awesomeness of Zuko and Katara taking her down.
I haven't been broken up with by letter or email but from my pov I can see a lot of way in which it might be better for both parties than something that is face to face.
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...so we have switched from "Azula going insane is bad because it's an example of women not being able to handle power" to "Azula going insane is bad because it makes other people less awesome."
Azula's story arc was fantastic. She was amazing. She was scary, she was good at what she did, and the longer we knew her the more complex and human she became.
Zuko didn't take her down. He culminated his arc not by defeating his father or younger sister, but by standing up to/turning away from his father, and helping other people. He saved Katara's life. He didn't take down Azula at all. He fought her, but he didn't defeat her.
Katara defeated Azula. In an amazing god-damned fight. It was no less intense because Azula was crazy. She was always damned scary, and while her unhingedness made Zuko think he could take her, Katara didn't agree. For her, Azula still seemed like a major threat. Katara was also working on a time-limit as well: she needed to end the fight so she could heal Zuko, her comrade-in-arms.
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And I'd not switching anything, I'm doing adding an 'and'.
This discussion has actually helped clarify my thoughts, which are, I think it's a shame how the timing with Azula going crazy worked out and that she went crazy is such an explicitly feminine way (hair cutting is often really expressly tied with the feminine.)
Katara defeated Azula. In an amazing god-damned fight.
Agreed. It was my favorite part of the finale. That said, as a viewer it would have been more satisfying if she hadn't been crazy when Katara and Zuko fought her, but that is totally my personal opinion.
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So for me, gender has nothing to do with it. It's about a 14-year-old who always yearned for the love of a parent, who was raised to value power over all other things and whose violent tendencies were encouraged by the one parent who paid special attention to her.
(Now I want to do a massive meta on the Avatar girls).
-I think it's honestly kind that Zuko left any kind of note at all. Alerting anyone with a loyalty to his sister of his intent to leave before he actually, you know, left, speaks to his basic decency.
In fact, even though I'm not a fan of the pairing in any way, I think it does show that he cares enough to not just disappear on her.
-I've had trouble in the past placing my finger on my issue with Ozai as the Big Bad during the finale, and I realized that it was this: his big terrible plan? Was really fucking stupid.
What is the point of acquiring territory if you're just going to destroy it all? Is there nothing to be gained from the Earth Kingdom? Land isn't the issue, it's what you get from it that makes conquering it worthwhile (After all, if the Europeans weren't always taking land for its resources they were competing with each other, but the point is that the Fire Nation doesn't want to compete).
And of course, if you don't know how to get what you want from the land, how stupid is it to bump off everyone who does know? Kill the people of the land and you essentially kill its resources.
Agh, it's just dumb. So yeah, it's fine that he's just evil, but his big old master plan took away from his evil edge with the stupid, so his fight with Aang fell flat for me.
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This is true. Were women are concerned, however, it's also a massive cliche, and the fact that we are shown multiple men in positions of power who handle it find and one woman who doesn't is subpar gender dynamics for Avatar. (Just look at the order of the white lotus and how just about all the old women that they met were crazy.)
-I think it's honestly kind that Zuko left any kind of note at all. Alerting anyone with a loyalty to his sister of his intent to leave before he actually, you know, left, speaks to his basic decency.
I think so.
Agh, it's just dumb. So yeah, it's fine that he's just evil, but his big old master plan took away from his evil edge with the stupid, so his fight with Aang fell flat for me.
You're right, the plan could have been better. Honestly, even just killing all the people while leaving the land intact (while also short-sighted) would have at least let them colonize and use the land without resistance.
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I think only a madman thinks this is a good idea, or caters to his 14-year-old daughter's obviously deranged whims.
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The only one who seems to handle power "well" is Long Feng, and his actions have consequences, too.
Just look at the order of the white lotus and how just about all the old women that they met were crazy.
This is a good point.
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Oh, yeah, the VA was amazing. But I really think Azula's breakdown would have played better if:
1.) it had been handled differently
2.) it had occurred at a different point in the series.
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Northern Water Tribe healer was sane, Gran-Gran was sane.
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Though since we're arguing over Azula's crazyness, I don't see why we're dealing only with an older generation, and not her peers.
I didn't mention the Avatars because of the line "Avatar Kyoshi, who gets considerably less screentime than Avatar Roku, and the airbender Avatar who only appears in the finale." They'd already been dismissed due to screentime imbalance.
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I think how they made Azula go crazy and their choices NOT to bring back the fortuneteller and the herbalist from season 1 into the Order of the Lotus were unusually bad gender dynamics for this show.
I honestly think Suki would stand up as a much better counterpoint to Azula if we actually saw her fighting and leading her team in season 3. While Suki IS the leader of the kyoshi warriors, she spends a LOT of time separated from them.
Yeah, you can get into plot considerations like time and needing to have Sokka and Suki be a bit isolated for their romance, but still...
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That's as bad as the one I heard about how it means it's TRUE LUV that Katara could heal him with normal water when it took Spirit Oasis water to heal Aang. To me, all that meant was that Zuko's wounds were non-fatal and Katara's technique has improved with practice.
Agreed on all points. I figure if Azula had to snap (and with a lack of stabilizing friends, I can accept it), it should have been a more . . . coherent madness. Not the hair-cutting crazylady but more of perhaps a Howard Hughes, carefully screening everyone who gets within 100 feet of her to ensure they're not secretly an assassin or something, or sending out random fire blasts to keep servants on their toes.
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Because, like, he totally got it saving her! I mean, I ship Zutara, but no. That's not the way it works.
Agreed on all points. I figure if Azula had to snap (and with a lack of stabilizing friends, I can accept it), it should have been a more . . . coherent madness.
YES! That is it exactly!
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Snorting fire at random intervals, possibly muttering deranged ramblings under her breath, but with severe control. Walking like a clockwork doll, bending like a living diagram. She seeks perfection at the cost of, well, not being wacky races.
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Walking like a clockwork doll, bending like a living diagram.
Exactly. That would have been more IC.