trying to make smut into something earth-shattering and lyrical can sometimes be just as bad to read.

*nods* I've become less and less tolerant of vague sex scenes with we're told they're having a great time, but I just can't figure out who's doing what to whom and it throws me off.

Also, have you seen wonderfalls? Because that's what this icon in from, and it's a hilarious scene.