What I was trying to say is that "Come for me, baby," isn't going to save a smutfic and arouse me at all if the fic is already bad. So pretty much, it's an improper use of vocab, but mostly earlier in the story. Dirty talk and words aren't going to save a smutfic if the rest of it is crap, and it's only going to make it worse, in my opinion.

Oh, very, very true. On the subject of 'come for me' - god, I am SO sick of it. Honestly, at this point, I'd like to read a fic where someone says that, and the girl is like, 'dude, I am not even CLOSE.'