I have to say, I'm much more forgiving of that one, horribly off-note line in an otherwise awesome fic, because I have written that horrible off-note line myself.

BELATEDLY: Wait, "womb"? How does the womb come into porn? Do I want to know, or is this going to be another sympathy-pain disaster like the clitoris thing?

"he spurted into her womb" "she could feel her womb contract around him" etc, etc.

Basically, it's anatomy fail.