For Nimblnymph - "You Know I'm No Good" Ino/Sakura

[redbrunja]

So, I crossed the line twice in making a Kakashi/Twilight reference (I know). As penance, nimblnymph, here is some nice.... well, it's porny Ino x Sakura to wash the taste out of your mouth.

Title: You Know I'm No Good
Author: redbrunja
Fandom: Naruto
Rating: NC-17
Warning: issues of consent.
Pairings: Ino/Sakura, Sakura/Kiba.
Summary: It's all Sakura's fault.

It was all Sakura's fault.

When they'd become roommates, Ino hadn't signed up for being there when Sakura dragged boys - freaking Kiba of all people and that stupid moustache that he thought made him look older- back into her room.

It didn't matter how quiet Sakura tried to be, how she tried to muffle those little needy sounds, her panting, when Ino was standing against the dividing wall between their bedrooms, she could hear every single thing.

Kiba didn't even try to be quiet - he grunted unrestrictedly each time he slammed Sakura's headboard against the wall, even when Sakura tried to shush him before forgoing that for mumbling more-more-more-please into either his shoulder or her pillow.

By the time they were done, Ino's stomach was sour with jealousy, her thighs clenched tight together and panties damp.

She'd go to the kitchen to let miserable tears squeeze out from between her eyelids (there was no way she was going to cry in either her room or the bathroom - both were adjacent to Sakura's bedroom - while Kiba was lolling about in Sakura's bed) and then one day that bastard waltzed in in a pair of red boxes that Sakura had bought.

Ino kept her back to him, pretended to be sorting the dry dishes.

"Hey Ino," he said in this smug, pseudo-casual voice and Ino snapped.

Without even thinking, she whirled around, hands flashing into the sign for her family's jutsu.

She caught her own body before before it hit the hard linoleum floor (it had been years since she expected Shikamaru to). While she carried it to the couch, she should've been thinking about how this was an abuse, a misuse of her gifts. Ino wasn't. She was thinking about Sakura all curled up in her bed, covers pulled up to teasingly cover naked skin.

Ino did pause, though. She spent an entire five minutes precisely shaving away Kiba's moustache, making sure to moisturize the skin afterwards.

Having a penis was one thing but Ino was not about to kiss Sakura with a clump of hair dangling over her upper lip.

She slipped into Sakura's room and her friend didn't even stir. Sakura didn't wake until Ino nuzzled her neck, kissed softly, working her way from the curve of Sakura's neck to her lips.

"Hey, baby," she whispered huskily.

"You shaved." Sakura sounded sleepily delighted.

"Yeah," Ino breathed, sliding a hand down between Sakura's thighs. She was still damp from her and Kiba's previous rutting but Ino didn't get sloppy. She carefully parted Sakura's folds, circled clit with her thumb, loving the way Sakura jerked against her. She listened, waiting until Sakura's breathing was quick and then stopped.

Sakura's breath caught a little in disappointment, even as she spread her legs wider. Ino didn't penetrate her, though. She pulled the covers back, baring Sakura's long torso, the inverted triangle of cotton-candy hair between her legs. Sakura blushed, face matching her flushed nipples.

"What are you doing?" she asked, crossing her arms over her chest protectively.

Ino grabbed her ankles, pulled Sakura to the edge of the bed.

"Something I've wanted to do for a long time," she whispered.

"But-"

"Lie back." Ino pulled Sakura's arms away from her chest.

Sakura did.

Ino ate her out. She sucked at Sakura's clit, teased it, her tongue stroking Sakura's slit from bottom to top, swallowing down her juices, penetrating her with tongue and fingers and after Sakura (oh, please, oh there god I'm so-) climaxed Ino fucked her with the insistent cock pressing on her belly. She rolled Sakura to her stomach and took her like that, stabbing into her over and over while Sakura slammed her hips back to meet each stroke, moaning wantonly as Ino told her what a fucking tease she was, acting so damn platonic every day when she really wanted this, wanted this, this, this.

Comments

[numara.livejournal.com]

UNF. hot, and kinda sad, but mostly hot.

it had been years since she expected Shikamaru to

love that line. and i can't help but wonder how kiba will react when he comes to. lulz

[sub-textual.livejournal.com]

I'm a little mixed about this.

While this was really hot, I kind of am a little disappointed that Ino couldn't be Ino and seduce Sakura that way. xD It would've been a lot hotter if it was a real yuri fic, as opposed to one that is still, in a way, pseduo heteronormative since Ino had to take on Kiba's body to seduce Sakura, which is actually not as empowering from a feminist perspective.

BUT...if we want to just look at this as what it is, and not take a feminist angle in reading it, it's VERY HOT SEX!!! Kind of sad though. ;_;

[onerottenpeach.livejournal.com]

Ohhhh this was good. As much as I love straight up yuri, I really liked the body swap thing. It made it so much more dysfunctional, which I adore seeing with Ino/Sakura. And that last sentence pretty much made my day.

I can totally imagine Kiba wanting to grow a creeper mustache, too. Ewww

Also whaaat Kakashi/Twilight reference? How do you even do that?

[nimblnymph.livejournal.com]

...You're forgiven. I'd say don't ever do that again, but if this is what I get in exchange... cross the line. Repeatedly. In fact, skip back and forth over it gleefully while carrying on about irridenscent and shimmery Kakashi's skin is when he gets in the sun.

I actually really like the fact that you put in so many darker undertones to it. First, violation of trust between the two girls. Second, the fact that it's Ino using Kiba's body. Third, the fact that Ino chose to break like this rather than wait for Kiba to leave before showing Sakura the RIGHT way to go down on someone. I know this was a quick piece, but I'd love to see you expand on it in the future. You know, work in something about what Ino thinks of having a penis, maybe some reaction from everyone afterward. It'd certainly be interesting to see the fallout of it all.

On another note... Kiba's mustache. That just became my new favorite fanon.

[sahara-storm.livejournal.com]

Oh wow. That is wrong is the most wonderful way possible and I loved it. RAW EMOTION + HOT SEX? YESSSSS

♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

[mistaria.livejournal.com]

Deliciously deviant~ <3

[a-lifestyle.livejournal.com]

She caught her own body before before it hit the hard linoleum floor (it had been years since she expected Shikamaru to)

Unf, that just hit me like the weight of a billion bricks to the gut. I love how there's this tension and darkness that weaves through the story. They're all a little fucked up, and for all intents and purposes, it's just perfect.

Not to mention, seriously, I haven't read good Ino/Sakura in awhile, and goddamn, I miss it. Thanks!

[anat-astarte.livejournal.com]

Oooooooh! Hot, angsty, mind possessing!Ino!! Awesome stuff!

Sooo, um,..do we get to find out what happens when Ino releases Kiba and the truth is ..exposed? XD

[destinydivine.livejournal.com]

What I love about this fic is that it only seems to touch on the surface of so much more. Besides it being kinda hot and kinda sad, it leaves me wondering a hell of a lot. I like that I don't have all the back story; like, is Ino in love with Sakura, or does Sakura know this or not? There are so many questions left unanswered that it just makes the situation that much sadder...and that much more longing. As much as I'd to see this expanded upon, I think it would ruin the feel of the whole story, so, uhh...I'm satisfied, regardless ♥

[(Anonymous)]

Are there any other InoSaku fics you've written? you said you had written a couple but i can't find them on ur page.