ext_356080 ([identity profile] marusaia.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] redbrunja 2009-10-16 08:58 am (UTC)

I love this. Very nicely done. I'm always pleased when I see more Revy/Rock fiction. Dutch's reaction is right on the mark. Although I'm a little curious as to why and how most of Revy's clothes wound up in the fridge, not to mention why Rock apparently had enough time to fold them up nicely like he was doing laundry. Or why the bra happened to end up on the cornflakes box.

I wouldn't say that resolving the unresolved sexual tension wouldn't necessarily solve any problems. It would certainly solve a few problems. Of course it would create a few new ones as well. But the fact that Revy didn't kill Rock straight off, and that Dutch wasn't interrupted by the sounds of bloody murder, indicate that things seem to be looking up for the couple, as much as they can at any rate.

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