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redbrunja ([personal profile] redbrunja) wrote2009-08-06 08:33 pm
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Fic: "Empty Spaces"

Okay, so it turns out I wrote more for the last Naruto Kink Meme than I remembered. And apparently felt the need to give Hinata some love. Or angst. Same thing, in my fics, most of the time. ^_^

Title: Empty Spaces
Author: redbrunja
Fandom: Naruto
Rating: NC-17
Characters: Neji/Hinata
Author's Note: written for the anonymous kink meme.
Summary: Neji builds empty spaces.

"Harder, Hinata-sama," Neji orders.

Hinata had been gently nibbling the tip of his cock, now she pulls away just far enough to speak.

"Yes, Neji-niisan," she says obediently, breath warm against his skin and then she's opening her mouth, swallowing him down.

She's good at this; good at all the bedroom arts. Neji doesn't know if she's used them on missions yet or if his cock is the only one she's ever serviced, if he's the only man who's teased her breasts, fingered her until she came with a sharp cry. He's never asked. He knows she was a virgin before him. She was too tight not to be and when he'd penetrated her, she'd worn the exact same expression that she wore at their chuunin exams, determined and in pain and doing her best not to show it. That time, he came remembering the way her heart had felt, stuttering under his hand.

Neji rocks his hips, thrusts a little deeper and she just takes it, tips her head back and sucks hard. She's gripping his ass, clutching as if she has any control over how fast or slow he fucks her mouth.

He loves watching his cock slid in and out of her mouth, her eyes closed, blushing so hotly he can feel it. Her lips sucking and sliding down his length, the way his skin glistens from her spit.

His balls tighten and he grips her hair. He can feel his climax coming, his belly and groin and legs tensing in anticipate.

"Swallow me," he orders as his orgasm hits. She does one better, swallowing him as he jerks into her mouth and then licking him clean, one long swipe of her tongue after another.

[identity profile] oceansex.livejournal.com 2009-08-07 08:04 am (UTC)(link)
there's just something so deliciously fucked up about Neji/Hinata, and as always, you capture them perfectly. extra points for the last line. made me giggle. ;Db

[identity profile] redbrunja.livejournal.com 2009-08-07 11:20 pm (UTC)(link)
They are truly delicious in their fucked-up-ness.

[identity profile] marley-station.livejournal.com 2009-08-07 10:43 am (UTC)(link)
Hinata makes the best sub, doesn't she?! My goodness.

[identity profile] redbrunja.livejournal.com 2009-08-07 11:18 pm (UTC)(link)
She really does have the personality for it, in a lot of ways.

[identity profile] anat-astarte.livejournal.com 2010-01-04 07:25 pm (UTC)(link)
Wow, this is still one of the hottest Neji/Hinata fics I've ever read, and the ending is priceless.

[identity profile] redbrunja.livejournal.com 2010-01-05 07:03 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you very much!

[identity profile] indira14.livejournal.com 2010-08-12 11:00 pm (UTC)(link)
So, I've finally given up trying to catch up with your current updates (thre are just too many), and figured I might as well comment on the older entries as I read through.

This was written quite a while ago, I realize, but the moment I saw the names "Neji" and "Hinata", I knew I had to read this! And I'm glad I did. Usually "subtlety" is associated with NejiHina, but I love how bluntly this has been written! The [livejournal.com profile] hyugacest community is not as active as I'd like it to be, so I think I'm going to scrounge around your journal for more of these. :D

[identity profile] redbrunja.livejournal.com 2010-08-17 03:42 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks for the comment!

And yes, this is much more bluntly written than Neji/Hinata usually is.