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Okay, I'm writing my Sai-fic, and I want him to say something really insulting to Ino without realizing it.
Here's what I have so far:
Once, Sai had asked Ino why she persisted in pointlessly flaunting her sexual availability in front of a teammate who was clearly uninterested in her specifically and possibly the entire female gender. Ino had slapped him across the face and then attacked him with a kunai when he commented that she hit more more gently than Sakura did.
I honestly don't think that sounds quite bad enough. Basically, I want Sai to say something to the effect off: why do you act like an utter whore around Shikamaru when he's clearly either homosexual or revolted by your appearance?
Only it needs to be phrase more Sai-like.
Here's what I have so far:
Once, Sai had asked Ino why she persisted in pointlessly flaunting her sexual availability in front of a teammate who was clearly uninterested in her specifically and possibly the entire female gender. Ino had slapped him across the face and then attacked him with a kunai when he commented that she hit more more gently than Sakura did.
I honestly don't think that sounds quite bad enough. Basically, I want Sai to say something to the effect off: why do you act like an utter whore around Shikamaru when he's clearly either homosexual or revolted by your appearance?
Only it needs to be phrase more Sai-like.
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And Sai is well worth spending more than three chapters on. He cracks me the hell up, and has a backstory that I really respect. I mean, why he is so screwed up emotionally makes total sense to me, and he is DOING something about it, which I approve off.