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Monday, September 24th, 2007 01:25 am
Tell me about a story I haven't written, and I'll give you one sentence from that story.
Wednesday, September 26th, 2007 07:28 am (UTC)
Yeah, plus at that point she'd be very hurt by him cause he'd left her in that orphanage (I have the feeling she saw him walk away), plus she'd not that much younger (Jian was about 4 years older, Zhi only about ten years younger) and I really do have a Gojyo + younger women he met when they were girls (shut up, if it can be heinlin's kink it can be mine, okay?)

Good thing he'd have already taught her how to handle herself back when they were kids.
Wednesday, September 26th, 2007 06:03 pm (UTC)
No, no, you're good, the smaller age difference, falling in love after a reunion with someone first met as kids is a pretty classic trope.

If it were Heinlein, now, she'd be a buxom redheaded brilliant astrophysicist who really really just happens to want to be knocked up constantly, oh and also there's about a half-dozen more brilliant sexy babes just like her and they're all in a plural marriage where they have witty intellectual conversations between boinking each other silly.
Monday, October 1st, 2007 06:42 pm (UTC)
Snort.

Nope, not a buxon redhead. She is quite smart, but she's blonde and small-breasted and has a bit of a temper and a sarcastic streak. (Because I want to be really sure I'm not just rewriting him with Yaone.)