3 Hakkai x Yaone Drabbles

[redbrunja]

 #3: Things That (Don’t) Go Bump In The Night

 

 

It was unbelievable.

  

And unfair.  

 

In the room next to him, there was a slight sigh from the bedsprings. It was absolutely conceivable that Hakkai was simply rolling over.

 

Alone.

 
Then there was the barest sound of impact, as if someone had gently laid another someone down on the floor.

 

Dead silence.

 

Goyjo listened to the sounds not-leaving Hakkai’s room mulishly.

 

If anyone on this little trip should be sleeping with the enemy– the hot, had the best rack in India, legs made to wrap around a man’s waist, dressed like every deviant's dream– enemy, it should be him.

 
Goyjo shoved his pillow over his head on principle.

 

 

#26: Between the Sheets

 

We should be doing this in the bed. Hakkai thinks, thinks of sheets and pillows and propriety. Yaone is writhing against him, he’s shoved her back against the door– clearly he has the better situation, because it’s sinfully easy to pull up her skirt and slide his fingers inside her (slick and hot and–) while she wraps her legs around his waist, tugging at his belt.

 
He’s being selfish, he should be slow and sweet, but Yaone moans when he tries to pull away, shoving his pants down.

 

Reason gratefully capitulates at the approving sound she makes when he thrusts into her.

 

 

#30: Post-Series (Chakra)

 

Hakkai gently dabbed at her face with a damp cloth.

 

Yaone leaned against the bathroom sink, watching the fabric redden.

  

“Are you alright?” he asked.

 

 Yaone thought a moment (the punch of her spear sliding through Nii’s skull, hot blood splattering her face, vicious satisfaction blooming in her heart as he died, spitted against the wall) and nodded, truthfully.

  

Hakkai’s face cleared and then he frowned.

 
Yaone looked in the mirror. There was only one spot of blood remaining, a dark circle in the center of her forehead. She took the cloth from Hakkai and scrubbed hard.

 

When she lowered her hands, the mark still remained.

 

Comments

[oozaru-angel.livejournal.com]

*blinks* Does this mean that Yaone is the new Sanzo to take over from Ukoku? He would find that funny, wouldn't he...

All very good. I particularily like the first one.

[redbrunja.livejournal.com]

Yep, that was implied. I found that one line in the Buriel arc where Nii's master roars something to the effect that the new Sanzo steps over the body of the old, and it made me wonder if whoever killed Nii would inherit the Sutra. And if anyone deserves to kill Nii, it's Yaone.

Thank you. The first one was fun to write. Poor Gojyo.

[pzb.livejournal.com]

Heee, I remember those first two. I still love the implications of the Gojyo one. And good lord, the second one is still hot no matter how many times I read it. :D

Heh, I like the idea of Yaone being the one to step over Nii. Course, I wonder how Hakkai would feel, sleeping with a Sanzo... XD

[redbrunja.livejournal.com]

Glad you liked. And the unfortunate side effect of being a beta is it's hard to be suprised by what I post.

Who doesn't like Yaone stepping over Nii?

"Course, I wonder how Hakkai would feel, sleeping with a Sanzo... XD." Now I want to play with this idea so much. My first though was, 'it's Yaone, he's not going to care,' and then realized how much I could play with his sinner complex, and his belief that he's a danger/defilment to her, and she'll think he doesn't want her any more.....

[pzb.livejournal.com]

Hey, I'll take that side effect. :D

About the only thing better than Yaone stepping over Nii is Yaone stepping ON Nii. :D

Oh, poor Hakkai just can't get a break these days, can he? XD

[redbrunja.livejournal.com]

Well, well just image she kicked him a few times to make sure he was dead, shall we?

And no, poor Hakkai can't.

[pzb.livejournal.com]

Heh, I can go for that. :D

I think another icon I need to add to my list is one of Yaone kicking ass.

[redbrunja.livejournal.com]

YES.

Also, because I'm curious, what did you think Hakkai's reaction to Yaone's new title would be?

[pzb.livejournal.com]

*snort* You think he has a persecution complex NOW?!

I think he'd be afraid to touch her, sinner that he is, and taint her (not that Genjyo Sanzo isn't as tainted as they come...) And I'm sure it would result in Yaone having to force him into bed at some point (else, she'd have a complex of her own, thinking that now that she had this title, he no longer wanted her... It could be a glorious angstfest ending in even more glorious sex. XD)

[smillaraaq.livejournal.com]

That sounds absolutely plausible for both of them.

And I really, really want to read it.

[redbrunja.livejournal.com]

Yeah, I can see that. And I think Yaone would think that Hakkai didn't want her anymore.

I actually have the idea in my head that having 4 sutra together does funky things with the sanzos powers, so Genjyo Sanzo starts 'hearing' Yaone, who's moping about how Hakkai doesn't want her, doesn't love her, gods, her heart is breaking, why does it hurt so much to see him at breakfast, she misses him so much and he's not even looking at her anymore... and end up coming into her bedroom and yelling at her to shut the hell up, and Sanzo winds up playing matchmaker just to get her to stop whinging.

And then it backfires when they get back together before Yaone learns to stop projecting mentally. *snicker*

[smillaraaq.livejournal.com]

*giggling madly*

Oh, oh this sounds HYSTERICAL. He was cranky enough about "hearing" Goku all the time -- having to listen in on THAT?

I almost feel sorry for Sanzo. ALMOST. ;)

[redbrunja.livejournal.com]

But think how education it would be to learn (abeit second hand) that sex doesn't suck. *snort* Imagine Sanzo learning about sex from a chicks pov!

And yeah, I it would make him grateful when all he's hearing is whining for food, and not "oh, gods, there, yes" with the accompanying images. He'd learn more about Hakkai than he ever wanted to know.

[pzb.livejournal.com]

Heh....tell me you will be writing this at some point or other?

[redbrunja.livejournal.com]

I think I may have to. A lot of people seem to want to know more about what happens next.

[smillaraaq.livejournal.com]

Yes, yes we do!

Really, the prospect of delicious HxY angst, followed by even more delicious HxY makeup sex, PLUS pissy mortified Sanzo having to overhear it all? That's GOLD right there, that is. :)

[redbrunja.livejournal.com]

Thank you. I just need to get my to-do list to be a little more managable....

[smillaraaq.livejournal.com]

Oh, you have to play with that idea, it's brilliant. The sheer potential for deliciously angsty mutual guilt and misunderstanding, oh, my heart.

(And then just THINK of the eventual make-up sex! Mmmmm.)

[redbrunja.livejournal.com]

Oh, make up sex....

And I may actually end up writing it now that everyone seems interested.

[smillaraaq.livejournal.com]

Oh, those were love. The Gojyo voice in the first one had me giggling madly, poor boy. And I skimmed over the actual prompts so when I got to the end of the last one, you actually took my by surprise. Fun fun fun!

[redbrunja.livejournal.com]

I really enjoy writing Gojyo. He has such a fun voice.

And I'm glad that the last one was a suprise - it's a really fun idea to play around with.

[karel]

All three of these are brilliant :D

the enemy– the hot, had the best rack in India, legs made to wrap around a man’s waist, dressed like every deviant's dream– enemy

Great line, there ♥

[redbrunja.livejournal.com]

Thank you very much!

And thank for being specific about what you liked - that was a fun line.

[chomiji]

Aww, poor Gojyo! But very well done.

Heh, I wonder how Yaone feels about the idea of being a Sanzo! Perhaps you ought to write a sequel ... .

[redbrunja.livejournal.com]

Thank you.

I imagine Yaone is freaking out, and Hakkai isn't helping.

And I may have to.

[saruzake.livejournal.com]

Mmm... especially liked the second one. Also, poor Gojyo on the first one, but what can I say? The ladies like the intellectual types. ^_~

(Will abstain from Sanzo discussion, as the inner East Asian Studies nerd is going "she can't! she's female! Blah blah blah culture!") ^^;;;

[redbrunja.livejournal.com]

Smart is sexy. Especially when I comes with a face like Hakkai's.

(Yeah, I know she's female, but after all the nontraditional sanwos running around... plus someone like the Merciful Goddess pulling strings... I can't beleive it doesn't happen.)

[purpleicicles.livejournal.com]

Hells yeah! Yaone would make an awesome Sanzo! Though that would cause a lot of confusion whenever anyone yelled "Sanzo!" from then on!!!

And poor alone-in-bed Gojyo! *snicker*

[redbrunja.livejournal.com]

Yes, it would. And after they got used to her, I bet so many people would prefer Yaone to Sanzo, because she'd actually HELP them with their problems.

And yes, poor, poor Gojyo. I've volunteer to keep him company.

[cornerofmadness.livejournal.com]

i enjoyed these three

[redbrunja.livejournal.com]

Thank you, I'm glad.

[renegadekitsune.livejournal.com]

So I really, really liked all three of those...

And three totally took a twist I wasn't expecting, like majorly.

And now you have to write that or I will totally hunt you down...Holy god those were great.

[redbrunja.livejournal.com]

Glad you enjoyed!

And everyone seems to want to know what happens next with three! I had no idea it was going to be this popular!