Tell Me More About The Lady!Parts

[redbrunja]

THIS.

Only, because it's me, it's 'dick' SINGULAR. (I'm a firm believer in one penis or less per sex scene. And by firm believer, I mean that's just what I find sexiest.)

Also, this leads into two things I've been pondering.

1. I've been reading a lot of fucking filthy (in the BEST way) fanfic smut, which has me going, 'you know, I really need to up my smutty game. Get more explicit. Don't shy away from the dirty talk. At the same time....
2. I was working on a fanfic where the fic's climax (that's what she didn't say) doesn't get past first base (there are characterization reasons for this) and writing the kissing was so. hard. How do you say, 'so there was tongue but not too much tongue' in a hot way? Seriously, never have I more strongly wished I could pull a hot boy from out of my closet to make out with for research purposes. I mean, I often wish I could pull a hot boy out of my closet but that's usually more directly related to my libido and less related to trying to be accurate when describing how much tongue was used.

Comments

[jade-sabre-301.livejournal.com]

ooooooooooooooooooh my Loooooooooooooooooooooord you just made a Notorious reference and I have to love you forever. RED HAVE YOU SEEN THIS MOVIE. YOU WOULD LOVE THIS MOVIE.

as uh for further advice for tongue um is it the difference between running the tongue along teeth versus trying to reach the soft palate? Also there's active tongue-on-tongue action versus tongue-happening-to-be-in-mouth-while-trying-to-get-as-close-as-possible-to-the-other-person action. Uh none of those things I am saying actually sound hot, but, you know.

[redbrunja.livejournal.com]

I have not seen Notorious! But given that it is Hitchchock + spies + steamy kisses, I'm going to have to fix that!

Also there's active tongue-on-tongue action versus tongue-happening-to-be-in-mouth-while-trying-to-get-as-close-as-possible-to-the-other-person action. Uh none of those things I am saying actually sound hot, but, you know.

That's exactly the problem! How to describe it so it SOUNDS hot. It's hard (that's what she said).