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Friday, January 24th, 2014 06:29 am
Jennifer Crusie wrote an article on first meetings using Felicity and Oliver’s.

On the subject of her writing advice, I’m not sold on the necessity of needing the characters to be vulnerable, but I’d define it more broadly as characters needing to have a clear, emotional change during to the first meeting.

But really, you should be reading this article for the shade Crusie throws on Laurel/Oliver, the hightlights of which are:

That means that the viewer is given nothing to build future expectations on and in fact, actively hopes they never meet again because these people are unpleasant to watch: two hard, shiny surfaces who make each other colder by their proximity.

and

(It should be noted that Laurel is still supposed to be Oliver’s One True Love. I have no idea what show the people who keep saying that are watching, but I don’t think it’s this one.)

So say we all, Jenny Crusie. So. Say. We. All.
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Friday, November 1st, 2013 11:49 pm
I have really been craving jealousy-fic recently. Does anyone have any recommendations? (Fanfic or fiction, either works.)

I blush to admit it, but I seriously love fics with an element of jealousy, especially when combined with a side of pining. I love it when Character A doesn't realize he/she is in love with Character B until they start dating someone else, I love it when Character A knows that there isn't any reason to be jealous or they're being irrational but can't stop, I love it when Character A gets handsy and possessive in a situation where they don't totally have the right to*.

*If this is combined with fake!dating or fake!married it's EVEN BETTER. 'How dare character Y touch my pretend!spouse! Even though I am not actually married, I am feeling exactly as possessive and territorial as if I were. I'm not going to reflect to hard on that; instead I'll just glare and/or pointedly touch my fake!spouse.'
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Monday, August 26th, 2013 09:45 pm
I really wish that people, without making a HUGE THING about it, would just use ‘well-written’ or ‘badly-written’ female characters instead of strong or weak, because some of the most interesting female characters I could mention have huge weaknesses of character, which makes them interesting, drives the story, and works against this idea that female characters have to be above reproach at all times.

I'm thinking specifically of Briony in Atonement, who drives the plot, creates the narrative, is spoiled and jealous and longs to be stronger than she is and fails and attempts to rewrite her own and her sister's history.

Because calling Briony "strong' feels ridiculous, but goddamn is she a believable, relatable, narratively-vital and fascinatingly flawed character. Period. Full stop.
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Wednesday, July 31st, 2013 07:27 pm
There was this great post on tumblr that prompted me to have Tony/Pepper feelings, which are:

Pepper pushing the button at the climax of Iron Man is one of the least significant roles she plays in the story. Iron Man falls apart if Pepper isn't there because Tony's reaction to Pepper lets us know pretty immediately that while Tony is living this playboy life style he also has people that he cares about and ALSO, Pepper's reaction to Tony, the rooftop, the martini, show that just because you're a superhero, doesn't mean you get a pass on treating people well.
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Saturday, July 27th, 2013 12:46 pm
Jennifer Crusie speaks the truth about why Felicity/Oliver is AWESOME and also what makes opposites-attract relationships work. I knew that Felicity’s role was unplanned but I did not know HOW UNPLANNED. Learning that the first smile that Oliver gives Felicity was because Stephan Amnell just couldn’t keep a straight face – and then they kept that in the show - fills me with unholy delight.

Also, oh my god, in Faking It Eve was originally the romantic lead opposite Davy Dempsey. I CAN'T EVEN.
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Tuesday, July 9th, 2013 10:34 pm
There was a conversation (on a locked post, so) about fanfic authors having Felicity Smoak (of Arrow) be a fan of various Big Fandoms (Doctor Who, Game of Thrones, etc) and while I think it works better with Felicity* than a lot of other characters, I think it's a ballsier move than most fanficcers realize.

The thing is, name-dropping fandoms (especially a fandom that author loves or that is super-popular currently) is one of the easiest ways to throw a reader out of the story, because you have to deal with the reader's opinion about what that character would like** AND their feelings about the property in question.

I mean, when it works***, it really works, but I think that most writers don't realize what they're risking on what is often not a very important detail.

*I bet Felicity is watching Game of Thrones. But I also suspect she liked the books better.

**Sidebar, playing 'what other media would fictional character X love' is super-fun, imho.

***that time Tony Stark thought about his mother singing Simon & Garfunkle's "America" as a lullaby  and how he thought it was referencing Captain America ALL THE FEELINGS MY GOD.


[+] Finally, based on the conversation that inspired this post, now I’m imagining that Felicity is a total arthouse film and History Channel geek, instead of the more common sci-fi/fantasy nerd.

[+] There is a whole other post regarding writing canonically well-read characters like Rory Gilmore, Blair Waldorf, and Dan Humphrey.
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Saturday, May 11th, 2013 11:36 pm
“When in doubt, have a man come through a door with a gun in his hand.”
— Raymond Chandler

A knife will also be accepted.
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Sunday, December 30th, 2012 10:11 pm
So a while back, Ex & The Single Girl by Lani Diane Riche was offered as a free kindle download, which I totally took advantage of.

As romances go, it's a decent little romp. Nothing particularly unexpected, nothing really offensive, amusing enough.

With one exception:

First, the heroine of Riche's novel thought that Marlowe was Shakespeare and BOOM, so much sympathy lost.
Shakespeare Was Shakespeare, Okay? Can We Please Move On? )
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Tuesday, November 13th, 2012 08:45 pm

Speaking personally, my nano is actually, shockingly, still on track. But come Dec 1st, good goddamn I going to write so much self-indulgent, smutty fanfiction. And finish my current crop of wips.
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Sunday, November 11th, 2012 07:54 pm
Writing a sex scene between my two main characters is a perfectly acceptable way to get my daily word count, right?

Right.
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Saturday, November 3rd, 2012 01:15 am
So all my talk about cheating on Nano? And getting a head-start on my novel? I ended up needing to scrap everything I had written prior to November 1st. It's a damn good thing I love irony, isn't it?

I had started my story in the wrong place - which I knew even while writing - I knew that I was starting to story too far back from when it actually began but I wasn't sure where exactly to start... until someone on my flist (I can't remember who) reminded me of Jennifer Crusie's conflict box and I realized that:
  1. I did not have an antagonist (still don't, actually)
  2. There was lots of external peril but no actual conflict in the stuff I was writing
So, yeah, I moved the story up (what would be) eight scenes and thus the previous words I've written are now irrelevant.


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Also, does anyone have any good advice on how to discover who your antagonist is/should be?
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Wednesday, October 24th, 2012 08:00 pm
"Lit" being a genre just like "fantasy" and "science fiction" are genres is a subject near and dear to my heart. Which is to say, I LOVED this article.
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Sunday, October 21st, 2012 12:09 pm
I am totally cheating on nano and doing some preliminary outlining, writing, world-building, etc.

My story is going to be set in a world inspired but very much not western-front WWII.

Any suggestions on how to name countries/languages so that people are like, 'oh, that's the analogue to England/Germany/etc' without using the RL name?