So in thirty episodes, the relationship has escalated to standing really close and a shoulder clasp.
Jennifer Crusie wrote an article on first meetings using Felicity and Oliver’s.
On the subject of her writing advice, I’m not sold on the necessity of needing the characters to be vulnerable, but I’d define it more broadly as characters needing to have a clear, emotional change during to the first meeting.
But really, you should be reading this article for the shade Crusie throws on Laurel/Oliver, the hightlights of which are:
That means that the viewer is given nothing to build future expectations on and in fact, actively hopes they never meet again because these people are unpleasant to watch: two hard, shiny surfaces who make each other colder by their proximity.
and
(It should be noted that Laurel is still supposed to be Oliver’s One True Love. I have no idea what show the people who keep saying that are watching, but I don’t think it’s this one.)
So say we all, Jenny Crusie. So. Say. We. All.
On the subject of her writing advice, I’m not sold on the necessity of needing the characters to be vulnerable, but I’d define it more broadly as characters needing to have a clear, emotional change during to the first meeting.
But really, you should be reading this article for the shade Crusie throws on Laurel/Oliver, the hightlights of which are:
That means that the viewer is given nothing to build future expectations on and in fact, actively hopes they never meet again because these people are unpleasant to watch: two hard, shiny surfaces who make each other colder by their proximity.
and
(It should be noted that Laurel is still supposed to be Oliver’s One True Love. I have no idea what show the people who keep saying that are watching, but I don’t think it’s this one.)
So say we all, Jenny Crusie. So. Say. We. All.